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Saturday, September 1, 2012

Blake/Michael Part 18

Warning: This Post Contains Male/Male Sex! If You Are Not Old Enough or Are Uncomfortable With Same Sex Couples Please Leave this Page At Once. Otherwise Enjoy!


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Michael was pinned to the wall as Blake's soft lips were pressing against his. This was it, this was the kiss, the one special kiss that people wait a life time for. The kiss that you never want to end because you know that it will probably never happen again. But that's why it's so special, that's why everyone wants to experience it, that's why it's "The Kiss". Some people wait a life time for a moment like this. Both Blake and Michael realized this and decided to go with it.

Blake tried to pull away from Michael's lips, but it was like trying to separate two magnets. In school, they teach you that if you have two magnets labeled "N" on one end and "S" on the other, the two "N's" and the two "S's" will repel each other because they are the same. But if you place the "N" and the "S" sides together they instantly stick together and can be hard to pull apart. What they don't teach you is that sometimes, and I do mean sometimes, two "N's" or two "S's" can attract in a way that nothing (Not even Ryan) can pull them apart!

Blake grabbed Michael's shirt and pulled it open. Some buttons flew off the shirt as he did so. Michael removed his shirt and let it fall to the floor. They stopped kissing long enough so that Blake could take off his t-shirt. Then they kissed again. They wanted each other so bad.


Michael was still up against the wall when he grabbed Blake and switched places with him. Now Blake was up against the wall. Michael kissed him hard, pinning Blake against the wall, the cold hard wall only added to the intensity now shooting out of Blake and Michael.

Michael started undoing Blake's jeans as Blake kicked his shoes off. Then Michael pulled down Blake's jeans and boxers at the same time. Just like in Blake's dream Michael was on his knees, and just like in his dream Michael wrapped his lips around him.

The warmth Blake felt almost melted him completely, he had to lean against the wall to stop himself from collapsing from the instant pleasure he felt. But when he did so the cold wall against his back and bare butt sent a cold tingly sensation throughout his body that crashed with the warm tingly sensation that Michael was creating making it impossible for Blake to process what was going on so he just let Michael do all the work. The cold and hot sensation reminded him of that night, the night with the icy hot, the night that started it all.

Michael was letting Blake in deeper and deeper. He had no idea what he was doing but Blake was not complaining. Michael reached around Blake with both hands and grabbed his butt. Michael’s warm hands felt great as they made contact with Blake's butt cheeks.

Michael wanted Blake inside him. He kept going deeper and deeper. Blake was still leaning against the wall trying to stay upright. Michael stopped walled over to his suite case and pulled out a pack of condoms.

"I got these from the hotel. They were free" Michael said.

"That's a lot, we better hurry up if we're going to use them all before the others get back" Blake said as he walked over to Michael.

Michael smiled, his smile made Blake feel like he had already won The Glee Project. Blake kissed Michael and started unbuttoning his jeans. Once they were unbuttoned Blake guided Michael to the bed, once they were at the foot of the bed Blake pulled down Michael's jeans and pushed him onto the bed. Michael was now fully naked Blake tore open a condom and rolled it on.

Michael watched as he did so and he knew what that meant. He started to turn around but Blake stopped him.

"No, I want to look at you, only you" Blake said.

Michael smiled again.

"I love you" Michael whispered.

Blake was still standing at the foot of the bed when he lifted up Michael's legs and held them by his ankles. Michael's butt was just on the edge of the bed and Blake positioned himself for entry. Blake placed Michael's legs one on each shoulder and got close to him. He looked directly into his eyes. Michael smiled and nodded a yes.

“I love you too” Blake whispered back looking directly into Michael’s eyes and Michael knew he was telling the truth.

Blake entered. Little by little, inch by inch he went in and Michael welcomed him. They never once broke eye contact. Once Blake could no longer enter any further he gently pulled out and then in again. Michael let out a soft but sexy sigh. Blake smiled, as far as he was concerned he has already won The Glee Project.

Blake picked up speed and started entering harder. Michael dug his fingertips into Blake's back. Blake could feel Michael's heart beating in sync with his. At this very moment they were one being.

Just then they heard a sound, someone was coming. They pulled apart and reached for their towels. They wrapped them around their waist and ran into the bathroom, locked the door, and waited.

They heard a guy and a girl giggling. They pressed their ear against the door to hear better, through the door they could hear Charlie and Aylin. They had come to do what Blake and Michael were already doing. They kissed their way to the girl's dorm room to do it. They too have been trying to get a moment alone.

Michael pulled off Blake's towel, Blake was still hard. Michael guided Blake into a shower stall. They closed the blurry door behind then and kissed. From the outside you can see two naked, blurry figures kissing. The stall was built for one person so there wasn't too much room to move around. Michael turned on the water and it felt like they were kissing in the rain. Drops of cool water hit their hot bodies.

Blake was still hard and wanted to be inside of Michael, so he turned him around and positioned himself behind him. From the outside you could see how the two naked blurry figures become one. You can see Michael's hands pressing against the blurry glass as Blake enters him again. Blake entered a little too rough but Michael’s body quickly translated the pain to pleasure. Pleasure he knew only Blake can deliver.

The shower head continues raining cool water upon them as Blake rains kisses upon the back of Michael's neck. Blake uses his long arm to reach down and around Michael and grabs him. Michael was rock hard. Michael felt Blake wrap his hand around him. Blake gently started stroking Michael, back and forth in sync with his movements. At this point Michael knew that Blake’s hands were magical. The massage Blake gave him with the Icy Hot sent blood rushing to that one part of Michael’s body that was now wrapped inside Blake’s hand.

Michael was still pressing his hands against the blurry glass and Blake stroked him faster.  Michael couldn't help but lean his forehead against the blurry glass. The pleasure was too intense for him to stand up straight. Blake tightened his grip and he entered deeper inside of Michael.

Blake noticed Michael's body tightening as he stroked faster and harder. Blake forced himself inside Michael, placed his free hand on Michael’s abdomen, held this position, and continued stroking Michael with his right hand. Blake could feel Michael's abs tightening as he continued running his whole hand around Michael. Michael let out a soft moan as he came onto the blurry glass and collapsed against it.

Now from the outside you could see Michael's hands, right side of his face and chest pressing against the glass. Now it was Blake's turn to go so he pulled out of Michael a little and entered him again forcing Michael's entire body to press against the blurry glass. From the outside you can see Michael coming once more onto the blurry glass. Blake continued going in and out of Michael as Michael continued pressing up against the blurry glass wall. Deeper and harder he went as the cool water got cold. But the water was no match for the heat being generated in this tiny glass stall. The cold water simply evaporated as it made contact with Blake and Michael hot skin. Creating an Icy Hot feeling in the shower that reminded them both of “that night”.  

Blake breathing picked up speed. In and out he went. Michael allowed him to do so. As he got closer to climax Blake took a deep breath, he inhaled a mixture of air and chlorinated water, which only added to the intensity he felt and he came inside the condom that was inside Michael.

Blake turned Michael around and kissed him. It was the perfect end to a perfect night.

“Thank you for coming back to me” Blake whispered into Michael’s ear.
‘Thanks for waiting” Michael whispered back and they kissed again.

They both finished showering and headed quietly back into the boy's dorm. Everyone was still out except for Charlie and Aylin who were doing something similar to what Blake and Michael did but different pluming was involved. They picked up their clothes and put on their boxers and a plain white t-shirt. Then they kissed good night and each fell asleep in their own bed.

The next day was hell! They had to rehearse choreography with Zachary and everyone was tired. With the exception of Blake and Michael. Everyone came back pretty early in the morning and only slept about an hour. They spent all day rehearsing until they were so tired that all they could do was fall asleep.

The next day they had to shoot the music video. Everyone was rested and ready for the shoot. They did their best and worked hard. It was their last music video shoot together. It was also Blake’s reminder that he was still in the competition. He was one of three left and he knew deep down inside he wanted to win. He’s heard way too many no’s in his life and another one would feel awful. But he knew that no matter the outcome Michael would be there for him.

Blake and Michael have been trying to get a moment alone with each other but someone keeps popping up out of nowhere and interrupts them. Blake wanted to talk to Michael, to tell him how nervous and scared he felt about performing for everybody tomorrow. But Blake was a great actor and was able to hide his nerves and fears really well. But not well enough.

Blake was in the courtyard shooting some hoops when Michael came out. For the first time since the night of their Icy Hot shower they were alone.

"Blake are you okay?" Michael asked softly already knowing the answer.

"Yeah I'm fine" Blake answered with a big smile.

But Michael saw right through that smile. He knew that Blake was not fine.

"I can tell when you’re lying" Michael said looking directly into his eyes.

Michael took a few steps towards Blake.

"You can win this" Michael said as he placed his hands on Blake's shoulders.

Blake laughed and then said,

"I feel like I've already won".

Michael looked into Blake's eyes once more.

"You're still lying" Michael said and he squeezed Blake's shoulders a little.

"Well it doesn't matter now" Blake said as he turned away from Michael and shot the basketball towards the hoop. He missed.

"Ali or Aylin will win they have an interesting and inspirational life story. I have nothing." Blake added.

"That's not true you have this" Michael lifted his right arm to his chest, reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out Blake's poem.

"This is the guy that Ryan hasn't met yet. If you show him this guy you can win this." Michael added.

Blake took the poem crumbled it up and tossed it towards a garbage bin nearby. He missed again.

"You can toss that paper, burn it for all I care but that poem will be forever tattooed across my heart. Michael said in a voice that sounded a little hurt.

"Michael, I'm sorry" Blake apologized because he felt bad for doing what he just did.

"Show them this guy, the guy that admits when he's wrong. The guy who doesn't give up. The guy I love." Michael words cut into Blake's heart.

Blake didn't know what to say, it was as if he had forgotten every word he once knew. Michael walked away Blake opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out. Blake sat down on the ground and watched Michael walk away. Once Michael was out of sight he looked up at the stars, trying to remember any word he could. He looked at the stars and the stars seemed to move. They spelled out a word, Blake instantly recognized that word, it was a name, the stars were spelling out "Michael".

Blake got up, ran inside, ran into the boy's dorm and jumped into bed. Everyone around him was sleeping in their beds including Michael, so he turned on the small lamp next to his bed and started writing. Words were flying towards him left and right. He struggled to write them all down. Once he had them down on paper he looked at Michael, and mouthed out a thank you in his direction, turned off his lamp and went to sleep.

Meanwhile back at the courtyard a shadowy figure made its way towards a piece of paper on the ground next to the garbage bin. The figure picked it up, un-crumbled it and read Blake's poem.

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    1. Thanks! What exactly did you find amazing?

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    2. Everything was since you're such a great writer!

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    3. Thanks. I'm happy that you like this.

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  2. This was... simply excellent! Thank you again :) But now I won't be able to sleep because of the shadowy figure :D I can't imagine who could be that...

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    1. Sorry about that, I guess I turned it into a horror fic now. Lol

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  3. Awesome! This is the best part I think!
    Blichael for ever :). They're made for each other. They're the only one where they can be totally themselves with.

    It was worth waiting :).
    X

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    1. Great! Thanks! Only two more parts left! How do you guys think it will end?

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    2. What I'm really hoping for is stabile relation between Blake & Michael. They have such a great chemistry. I feel like they're made for each other, they love each other so much. They're perfect together.

      We started reading because of Blake & Michael, so we would love to see them ending up together. We're rooting for them.

      I know you have other plans. To break them up. That's so sad and disappointing. They've finally found each other.

      Maybe you could write about their coming out? Or about telling the other contenders about their
      'relation'?

      Awesome! X

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    3. I still don't know how this is going to end. I want it to be shocking though. But I don't know if I can shock you guys anymore. :(

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  4. This is just amazing. U are amazing. I like all the sex scenes but this one is jus the best. I cant wait till the next part. I love it. I love michael and blake. I found this fic on youtube. I was warching a video and i read a comment that said go look at my blog. This is the best thing to read. Once again, amazing, and fantastic

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    1. Ah yes I spammed that on YouTube. I'm glad it worked! Please keep sharing!

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  5. I loved dis mystery cliff hanger! Great job on dat :D i think its nellie dou hmm well c oh and i found about dis blog during d glee project, watchin glee project on you tube, i introduced ur fanfic nd i was like "why not?" It already had like 3 chapters, and im reading dis fanfic ever since :D i absolutely love ur work. Oh and addin many reminders of d day how it all statred wit d icy hot - genius! i also loved d shower part, wer dey felt dey wer standing in d rain, dat was very romantic! Oops, my comment is very all over d place, but oh well xD once again, great job!

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    1. I'm glad you liked the cliffhanger. Since there are 2 more parts left I wanted to bring them back to how it all started. With the Icy Hot! ;) I'm happy someone noticed that!

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  6. What happened to all the readers? :(

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  7. Jesus Christ! This is beautiful. The perfect chapter, I have to admit it's my favorite so far. My heart was beating rapidly throughout the chapter. Excellent!
    My line: "You can toss that paper, burn it for all I care but that poem will be forever tattooed across my heart"
    AGGGGGGGWWWWWWWW awesome!!!

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    1. I love that line too! I'm glad you liked it. My heart was beating rapidly as I wrote this part I'm so happy you felt the same. ;)

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  8. I'm the only completely crazed by this story? I have a disorder. I admit it.
    This chapter is epic, but EPIC epic, I mean EPIC. Increasingly surprised, had everything, love, tenderness, sex and intrigue. Perfect.
    My line is all that happened in the bathroom! It is warm and tender at once, you do it very special. Excellent, excellent work. Congratulations!

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    1. Wow! Four epics in one sentence! That's awesome! Thanks! I worked hard on this part to make up for all the Nellie drama! Consider this a reward for sticking through this! I love reading your feedback thank you.

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  9. GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHH you did it again! Chapter incomparable. I loved it from the beginning to the end, the sex scene awesome, and I really like when Michael and Blake speak, that happened not long ago and I was very happy :')
    Great, just great. I hope the penultimate chapter :( :( (Cry a river)

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    1. Thank you! Your words make me feel like I did the right thing by choosing to write this part instead of doing my homework! ;) lol

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  10. What a great chapter!!! I'm very happy to read this, I was very happy for everything that happened, yes it's repetitive, but this is perfect. All lines are my favorite, I loved your fic. And I started reading because I saw the link on Youtube :p

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    1. Thank you! YouTube is awesome! ;) I'm hoping you guys like the last two parts as much as this one! I will start writing part 19 tonight.

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  11. Everyone should read this fic! It's awesome. The feelings that convey the characters are unique. I enjoyed every word of this chapter, sorry for not commenting earlier, I have very little free time, and the best thing I do in my spare time is read your Fic :D

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    1. Thank you so much! I know what it's like to not have free time now, it really sucks. I'm honored that you spend your free time reading what I spend my free time on writing. Did that make sense?

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  12. HOOOOOOOLA DULCE :D
    Yes, yes and yes! Obviously, I started reading and I was so ...
    http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m982v8CxJD1rv42vv.gif
    I sensed I was very happy reunion Blichael! I start the week well thank you honey;)
    Everything is still so perfect and lovely as the first day, as the first chapter. It is difficult to keep readers caught from the first chapter and not boring, and you did it ... you did I assure you.
    It's very beautiful to have tender parts, makes it much more interesting, like any normal relationship in sex, tenderness, intrigue, reunions .... Awwww what else I can say? You know I love you with all my being lol
    In part that Blake and Michael began to speak in the yard ....
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    Hermoso. Hermoso. Hermoso.
    My line: "Show then this guy, the guy admits That When He's wrong. The guy who does not give up. The guy I love."
    I want to kill. That was beautiful. I think I cry. haha
    Continued well. Sos the most! Thanks for so much quality in the history! It's the best.
    PD: Blichael is real! I know!
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    <3

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    1. As always, I sit and wait for you to leave a comment. I know you'll be honest with me so I'm always a bit nervous to read your comments. :) Thank you for being a fan, not only a fan of this fic but also a fan of my crazy ideas! These last two parts have not gained many views, probably because everyone is busy with school. But thank you for sticking with me this far. I read all the comments, sometimes more than once.

      Thank you Danee, I hope you're feeling better! Whenever you feel sad just think of Blichael. They will make you smile like a fool! :)

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  13. Amazing. The details are just wonderful! I think you've definately gotten better as a writer. ;) I can't wait to find out how it ends, but it will also be sad because it will be over! :(

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    1. Thank you so much. I feel that I'm improving too. Telling a story is hard, especially telling a believable one. You have no idea how hard it was for me to click on that publish button at first. I hoped at least one person would like my writing. Never expected this many people to like and even love this fic. Thank you!

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  14. Please believe me as I say that you're a very good writer. We enjoy every single moment of reading your fanfic.
    For me personallly was this part the best so far. Maybe because I'm chrishing Blichael, maybe because that amazing sex scene or maybe because this is a fanfic that might can really happen in our thoughts. I think it's all three.
    We would really love to see Blake & Michael staying together. They can fight to hard times as long as they're staying together.
    Besides that, Michael is the only person who can truly tell when Blake is lying. That says a lot a out their relationship.

    Maybe good to know: im from the netherlands. Blichael fans all over the world are reading your fanfics. Blake was in the glee project the best as well, also in this fanfic :)

    My compliment to you.

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    1. Thank you! I love telling this story! I always wondered what happened behind the scenes when the cameras weren't rolling. This fic is basically what my mind thinks happened.

      I think Blake and Michael are perfect together. I'm glad you guys think so too.

      I'm having a hard time wrapping my head around what you said. It's true, Blichael fans from around the world are reading this. It's crazy how a single picture started this whole thing.

      Thanks for reading and please share this fic.

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    2. Which photo? :)

      You're awesome!

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  15. U are the best broooooo! believe me, amazingggg job!

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  16. Holy crap! Definitely my favorite part about this history, fuckin perfect lol
    Ok, I look the stars when Blake said: "No, I want to look at you, only you"
    Are you kidding me? THE PERFECT MOMENT. yay my soul is so close get out, seriously.
    You're an excellent writer!

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    1. Thank you, I hope you're right because I have to write a screenplay by the end of the semester!

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  17. I'm sorry! a busy week, and I'm not the only one: (
    but as always I'm here to read your fic. Impressive. Without doubt the best chapter, all are excellent but this was the best, perfect. I can not believe only two more chapters ... I look forward to. (: you ROCK!

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    1. Yes, just two more. :( I've had a busy week too. I just hope the last two parts are as good as this one.

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  18. I'm so sorry for "Danee", but this GIF show my feelings, seriously :/

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    SORRYYYY :| XOXOXO love u guys.

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    1. So, the chapter is magic, silly smile all the way. YAYYYYYY two chapters? I can't wait! AAAAAAAAHHHHH (I'm the guy of up) LOL

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    2. Your Gifs made me laugh like crazy! I would love to see all the readers reacting like that. But that's kinda the down side to being a blogger. That's why I love reading your comments so much. I can't see your reaction to this but I can read about it. :) Keep them coming I love them.

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    3. Yes two more chapters and then I will focus on school. But i'll be here reading your comments. If you hate the ending let me know, if you love it let me know too!

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  19. Falling in love for this Fic. I promise lol
    The best all the way, (: xo

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  20. Every word of this story is etched in my mind for hours. 4 times I read this chapter, it makes me feel great. It's an amazing mix, each part fits perfectly like a puzzle. Congratulations, very original and credible. I hope the next chapter with many anxieties :3

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    1. Yes I want every part to fit well together. I try to make sure every part has a point to it. I have never written anything like this before. I honestly didn't think I could keep a story interesting for this long.

      I hope I decide on an ending soon. :)

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  21. Busy days for me too, but if you found the time to write, I had to make time to comment (:

    That was talking about when I said it was a killer cliffhanger! We all knew it was coming an epic part which would include the ultimate sex scene. At this point you should know how much I love reading your fic, and yeah, this part is AWESOME too. Love Michael and Blake together, love the blurry scene, love the references to part one, love the way it is blend with the reality, love the origin of the final poem. Love, love, love. And I love some quotes too!

    1. "This was it, this was the kiss, the one special kiss that people wait a life time for. The kiss that you never want to end because you know that it will probably never happen again."

    2. "-Show then this guy, the guy that admits when he's wrong. The guy who doesn't give up. The guy I love."

    3. "Michael turned on the water and it felt like they were kissing in the rain."

    4. "Blake picked up speed and started entering harder. Michael dug his fingertips into Blake's back. Blake could feel Michael's heart beating in sync with his. At this very moment they were one being."

    5. "Michael watched as he did so and he knew what that meant. He started to turn around but Blake stopped him. -No, I want to look at you, only you. Blake said. Michael smiled again."

    With all the happiness in these last parts, I could support a bittersweet ending, totally. Just saying. Do whatever the story needs and what you want ;) Until then, I'll count down the minutes to read the next part and the mind blowing finale.

    P.S. I might have an idea of the consequences of the shadowy figure at the end. Kind of. We'll see!

    Saludos.
    Ed.

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    1. Thank you! I knew this part had to be good. It had to be better than the other sex scenes. You guys wanted more Blake and Michael so I did my best to deliver. I think the Nellie triangle really hurt this fic because it doesn't get as many readers as before. Or as many comments.

      1. Those are from a song, well sorta I changed the words around a little to make it fit the fic. This song was sung by Kelly Clarkson and Leona Lewis. :)

      2. Yeah Michael really wants Blake to win. So this was him giving Blake a pep talk of some sorts.

      3. I really loved Michael and Nellie's kiss in the rain. It was so special. I wanted Blake and Michael to have one too.

      4. The idea for this line came while I was listening to "You Outta Know" and watching "The Human Centipede" lol

      5. I think eye contact is very important, it really makes a scene more powerful. Michael can tell when Blake is lying now because of this scene. He saw honesty shining through Blake's eyes at this moment.

      No one else wants a bittersweet ending. They want a happy ending. I honestly think everyone could use one. I'm still fighting myself over this decision.

      P.S. To your P.S. - I hope not, I really want it to be a surprise. But you guys know me so well now I don't think I can surprise you anymore. :(

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  22. Addicted to your Fic. Just finished reading this part and I can not wait to read what follows. Awesome, I can not say something original, everyone said what I think. Just perfect. I think you have a gift, wait, I assure you that you have a knack for writing. Each word stroked my heart. Warm, tender and very interesting. yaaaaayy

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    1. Thank you so much! You comment made me feel warm inside too. I love this fic and I'm glad you guys love it too.

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  23. Ok. I know I sound exaggerated, but my heart beat very strong and my eyes have contained many tears throughout the chapter. Maybe it's because I started to miss him, but I do not know very well. The best sex scene, love it. Thanks again, reading your story I forget my life and concentrate on imagining the beautiful fictional reality that you offer (: is very special every day read for me, thanks again!

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    1. Wow! Thank you so much! I personally love stories that take you away from your own life. You saying that this fic did this for you really makes me happy. Thank you! :)

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  24. Don't worry if you do not up the next part on time, faithful readers will be here waiting. We are all very busy, so relax :) successes in yours! xo

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    1. Thank you! I will try not to make you wait too long though. I write when ever I can. Usually before bed and in the morning. Thanks for your patience I will try not to let you guys down, but I should warn you I tend to let people down alot. Not on purpose though. :(

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  25. Beautiful! It's good to know I'm not the only one who read more than once each chapter lol

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  26. Do u know when the next one might be up? By the way this one was one of my fav.. once again you are amazing

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    1. I will try to have it up by Friday. I'm glad you liked this part.

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  27. This was an amazing blog, every time I turned the page(well hit the mouse button) I was intrigued. I think Micheal and Blake are so hot..This story would make a great book for the LGBT community. I think that the person who picked up the poem is going to be Nellie. In the end I think it would be fun for them to have a three-way..lol

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    1. I'm glad you think this would make a good book. I agree a three way ending would be fun!

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  28. No. No three way. Just hot michael and hot blake. Just them. Amazing

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