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Blake froze, his hands started to shake as he continued to stare at his cell phone. Michael and Nellie were kissing, but how? Blake thought. Michael had only been gone a few hours. How could he be with Nellie? Blake's cell phone turned off because it was out of battery. His heart was beating fast, his mind was racing trying to come up with a possible scenario as to how or why, no not why, just how, this could have happened. Blake knew that Nellie had feeling for Michael. He asked her directly the night she was eliminated. Nellie gave him an answer, she chose Michael.
Blake punched the pillow that smelled like Michael, and Michael's scent grew stronger with every punch. Blake couldn't understand why exactly he was angry, was he angry at Nellie for kissing Michael or was he angry at Michael for kissing Nellie? No, he wasn't angry because Michael and Nellie were kissing each other, he was angry because they weren't kissing him. He had to get to the bottom of this, so he plugged his phone in and waited for it to charge just long enough so it could come back to life.
When Michael and Nellie finished kissing, the song also finished playing. Michael looked at Nellie and she looked back at him. It was awkward for both of them but they both enjoyed it. Nellie's phone beeped, the beep meant that she had just gotten a text, she took out her phone to see the text message that came in. She opened it and it too had nothing written just a picture, the same picture that Blake saw.
"Oh My Gosh! Michael look at this!" she said as loudly as she could so Michael could hear.
Michael looked at the picture and immediately thought of Blake. If Blake ever saw this picture it would break his heart. Nellie thought the same thing. Michael reached for his phone and he saw that he had two text messages, the first one was from Blake it said
"How are you?"
Michael replied,
"I'm ok, I wasn't sent home I'll see you soon."
He hit send and went on to the next text message, it was from Lily Mae. It was the same text that Nellie got, just a single picture that screamed a thousand words. Michael left Nellie and walked up to Lily,
"Lily who else did you send this to?" Michael asked her.
Lily stopped dancing and looked at Michael,
"I sent it to you and Nellie you guys looked cute together. Why do you ask?" Lily looked confused as she answered.
Michael sighed in relief,
"Please don't send that to anyone else, okay?" Michael said as Abraham put his arm around him and waved his cell phone in front of Michael's face.
"You guys look cute together!" Abraham said.
Abraham had the same picture that Michael and Nellie had. Michael looked at Lily.
"I didn't send it to him a swear!" Lily answered before Michael even opened his mouth to ask her the question.
"But you took the picture. Who else could have sent out the picture?" Michael said beginning to sound a little angry.
"I didn't take the picture I just forwarded it to you guys." Lily said as she went through her phone to show Michael she was telling the truth.
Michael saw that the picture was sent from Shanna's phone.
"Shanna sent this picture to all of us!" Abraham said as he danced away.
Michael was confused, why would Shanna send out a picture of him and Nellie kissing to everyone but him and Nellie? Something was off and Michael wanted to find Shanna and ask if she had sent one to Blake. Michael could not see Shanna anywhere so he took out his phone and called Blake's phone. It went directly to voicemail. Michael's mind began to race. Has Blake seen the picture? Was he screening his call? Was he asleep? Was he dreaming about him? These are the questions that popped into Michael's head. Two hands came around his head from behind to cover his eyes.
"Guess who?" asked Nellie.
Michael put his phone in his back pocket and then reached up to uncover his eyes, he turned to face Nellie and said,
"We need to talk."
Nellie shook her head and took Michael's hand and walked him out. They got on an elevator and took it to the top floor. The night sky, full of stars shined down on them as they walked out onto the roof.
"It's quiet here we can talk." Nellie said then she smiled.
Michael did not know where to start. He liked Nellie, he cared about her, he did not want to hurt her. Michael did not want to tell her about him and Blake because he barely understood what exactly he and Blake were to each other.
Nellie could see Michael struggling to tell her something and she remembered how she struggled to tell Michael how she really felt too. Nellie was awkward around Michael when they were in the competition because she was falling for him. She didn't want to fall for him so she stayed away, she spent time with Blake to stay away from Michael, but when Blake began to fall for her things got complicated.
"When I was fifteen..." Nellie broke the silence looking directly at Michael,
"I fell in love with a boy also fifteen at the time. He was my everything. I gave him my heart, but he wanted more. I wasn't ready to give him everything, so he broke up with me. He told me that he felt stupid for wasting his time with me. He said I was an unsexy girl and that I would never find anybody better than him, and I believed him. Since then I have never felt sexy, and that's why I struggled during the competition. But when you said I was sexy, I believed you, you made me believe you. The day of the "Milkshake" video shoot I did those moves for you. Even though I was partnered with Blake I was thinking of you."
Tears were falling down Nellie's face, Michael just kept looking at her, he didn't know what to say.
"It's you, it was all for you, everything I did, I did for you. I was afraid to fall for you because I didn't want to get hurt. I closed myself off from love, because I didn't need the pain, one heart break was one more than I could take. But something happened for the very first time with you, it was like my heart melted to the ground and I had found something true."
Nellie continued crying, Michael did not like seeing Nellie like this, he wanted to say something to cheer her up but nothing came to mind. So he decided to kiss her. As he did so lighting flashed, a few seconds later they heard a thunderous sound followed by millions and millions of tears now falling from the sky.
Michael and Nellie's night started as a walk on the wild side, crashing a wedding, dancing the night away and now they were kissing hard in the pouring rain.
Michael and Nellie pulled apart, lighting flashed once again and Michael looked into Nellie's eyes. He definitely felt something for her an emotional connection, completely different from what he felt with Blake, and yet somehow the same.
They were both soaking wet, they ran to the elevator, got in and as the doors were closing they kissed again. When they got to their floor Michael and Nellie decided to change out of their wet clothes and meet up again at the wedding, so they each went to their own rooms to change.
When Michael entered his room he kicked off his shoes, took off his wet shirt and pants, then he remembered his phone was in his back pocket and it was probably wet. He bent down to pick up his pants, pulled out the phone, he examined the outside, it was a little wet but nothing too bad. Then he pressed on the screen to check to see if Blake had sent him a message. To Michael's surprise his phone was already twenty minutes into a call that he didn't make. At least not on purpose.
Michael put the phone up to his ear and said
"Hello".
"Michael, I know about the kiss" said a voice on the other side. A voice Michael knew too well, a voice Michael longed to hear, a voice he hoped would never say those six words.
Michael had butt dialed Blake and Blake had heard everything!
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Omggggg!!! More pleaseee!!!!
ReplyDeleteMore to come soon.....
DeleteOMG!!!!!!!!!! I love this so much!!! Can you try to make a scene where Michael and Nellie are kissing and Blake comes in... Michellie is a cute couple please make them date!!! When will the next one be up!!!??
ReplyDeleteI haven't written it yet so I'm not sure when it will be up.
DeleteAwww, this was cute :) Michellie is my fav couple besides Blichael <3
ReplyDeleteShould Michael and Nellie end up together?
DeleteYes! It would make it so interesting! :)
DeleteI want more. I like michael and nellie but i also like michael and blake. I cant decide. I love all three. I dont want blake to be hurt.
ReplyDeleteYes it will be tough but one of them will probably end up heart broken!
DeleteMaybe all three can be together? xD
DeleteMaybe..... :)
DeleteSo I like it! :) The intrigue and anxiety consumed me really haha improvements chapter to chapter! Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteI believe that despite all the obstacles Blake & Michael have to finish together, my heart breaks to pieces if not :(
Nellie & Michael is tender and pretty, but there's nothing like Blake & Michael, I think that they just look each other say all, and with Nellie that does not happen ... do not make me sad to lol
But what you choose for the Fic will be fine, I just hope that Blake will fight to the end for Michael and if you have to be, will be :)
(Sorry for the excitement haha)
Danee I am so sorry, you will probably hate me after you read the next part. I haven't started writing it yet but I do have an idea of how it will play out and you might hate me! :(
DeleteOh no :( I never hate you, well I suffer a little more haha but if you finish the Fic and Blake & Michael aren't a happy couple, that's do destroy me. In the meantime do me suffer more time, no problem lol but we all want a happy ending Blichael in background haha
DeletePS: Your comment made me very tenderly, I think we are a sort of online friends in the distance :')
Yes I think we are! ;) thank you for reading and sharing this blog.
DeleteThe way this story catching me, this is strange. I know how hard it is to write and the time it takes, so do not just want to say "more please", I congratulate you and say "GREAT WORK, AWESOME"
ReplyDeleteBy the way, I love Nellie & Michael, but please Nellie do not get against Blichael love because I'll have to hate hahaha :|
Thank You! Yes, writing is hard and does take up a lot of time, but I am really enjoying it so far. Getting messages that just say "more please" is nice because that means you like the fic, but I like to read comments that tell me exactly what you liked. This helps me write the next part! :)
DeleteMake michael and blake end up together. I dont want nellie to be hurt but i would rather have nellie be hurt then one of the boys. I love this so much. when the next part?
ReplyDeleteI still don't know how this is going to end, but you guys seem to want Blake and Michael to end up together. I don't know if they will. :(
DeleteOooh no :( Poor Blake... I hope in the end the boys will finally realise how perfectly they fit together. I feel sorry for Nellie, but she has to give up on Michael!
ReplyDeleteI don't think Nellie will ever give up on Michael.
DeleteBlake neither does not have to give up Michael :( :( :(
DeleteHe might have too. :(
DeleteJust another comment what it says "Poor Blakeeeeee!" :(
ReplyDeleteIt breaks my heart, he is suffering ... :(
In Tumblr was looking at some gifs of Glee-ality and is a completely Blichael chapter! All the while he looked, on and made gestures, and hugs? Awww <3 and now I come and read this really breaks my heart in two haha
But Blichael love has to win at the end!
Yes they did seem pretty close in the last episode I will write something to go along with the episode as usual but for now I will continue writing about that night, the night Michael was sent home. The night he fell for Nellie. The night Blake breaks up with him.......
DeleteOne suicide here if Blichael not end as happy couple haha Excellent chapter! Although painful, but excellent :D
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's what I was going for! The painful part, Not the suicide part! :)
DeleteBlake and michael. Blake and michael. Blake and michael. I love them. I want moooooore
ReplyDeleteYes me too, but they are apart right now. More coming soon.
DeleteMake a poll of best couple: Nellie/Michael, Nellie/Blake or Blake/Michael. Just for fun, in the end you decide :) Your story is going to kill me! In a good way. I love it, I want Blichael reunion OMGGGGGGGG more please
ReplyDeleteI did make a poll like this a few days ago, Blake and Michael won, Blake and Nellie got 0 votes, Michael and Nellie got 2 votes. So I imagine those two voters must be happy reading this :)
DeleteHello, Im form Argentina, I speak Spanish and I don't understand English very well, but I loved your Fic! Is so sweet! :) Please, follow this soon.
ReplyDeleteBlake and Michael do a lovely couple, I love them <3
Gracias! Do you read this fic in Spanish or English? I hope the translate thing I put on the side works! :)
DeleteI want more. More michael and blake. Whens the next one
ReplyDeleteNot sure yet I haven't started writing it yet.
DeletePLEASE HAVE MICHAEL AND NELLIE END UP TOGETHER!!!! I think it would be awesome if to get Michael he will tell everyonethat he loves him and then they will be together!! Will the next one be up tomorrow night!!! PLEASE!!
ReplyDeleteI will try to post it tomorrow, I haven't started writing it yet though.
DeleteOk, but please try to have Michellie be a couple!!
Delete;)
DeleteWe would love to see something new! BLAKE & MICHAEL.
DeleteIt's always boy and girl romance :s
I'm a fan of your fic since day one, but this is the first time I write you. I, like everyone else, love your work, it's just AWESOME. So here I go with some thoughts.
ReplyDeletePlease do not betray the reasons why, in my humble opinion, this is so great: keep it real and keep it about BLAKE/MICHAEL.
Yeah, I love Nellie too (including her ships, specially with Michael), but in this fanfic her role must be the third in the triangle, the catalyst for a delicious bittersweet drama, a necessary one for create conflict. Not complaining at all of her role (so far, you made it so good), I'm only mentioning cause I'm concerned about the direction this will take.
Another thought is the inclusion of others characters. Work it very well in minor roles, but please, please, please, don't involve anyone else in the core of this amazing story. No more crazy ships, there's no room in this fanfic to have spontaneous affairs, a triangle is a perfectly fine and dysfunctional and complicated love polygon. We don't need anything or anyone else besides Blichael + Nellie.
And, above all my suggests/wishes, keep it real. I fell in love with this story because you made it feel so real, so natural, like if it were possible. Don't turn me off, Turn Me On :)
Thanks for reading my words about yours. I wrote too much, but I was kind of in debt with you for been a big fan and never comment. Oh, and forgive me for the horrible redaction and grammar, si lo hubiese escrito en español, créeme, esto tendría mucho más sentido.
Saludos. Ed.
Wow that was the longest comment ever! From part 1 I have tried to keep this realistic as if it could have happened. That was my goal from the very beginning and the fact that you like it because of that made me smile! :) Thank you, Nellie is an important character in this fic I really like her. I know how you want this to end but if I keep trying to make this realistic them there is only one possible ending. :(
DeleteI just love this comment so much! Gracias, tu ingles es perfectos you hablo español pero no lo puedo escribir muy bien. Thanks for this comment I've read it like 10 times!
DeleteThank YOU. I truly appreciate your reply. Fair enough, I've read each part like 10 times :)
DeleteI'm ready to anything! I mean, I don't even know how I want this to end (I'm a sucker of bittersweet endings). Yeah, I really like Nellie, I love Michael and Blake, but the important thing is not who, but how.
In the real reality, the idea of Michael and Blake together in that way is barely impossible. In the reality of your story, I think can happen and still be so realistic and, well, possible. What I mean is that you have more than one possible ending. I don't know. I have great expectations, but I honestly trust you, this is your fic, so, whatever works for you, works for me.
I love Bittersweet endings too! I feel like those are the stories that stay with you forever! For example: Titanic, I will never forget Jack and Rose's tragic love story, For Jack, his love for Rose was only for a moment, since well you know.... But for Rose, her love for jack lasted a life time!
DeleteI would have loved a happy ending for this movie but it probably would not have been as Unforgettable as the original tragic ending.
But I also understand that stories like this almost always have a tragic ending, and it would be nice for this to have a happy ending to show people that this kinda love can and does excist.
Idk my mind wants tragic but my heart wants magic! I'm torn...... :(
Yeah, yeah, yeah, EXACTLY! My mind's flirting with a bittersweet life dosis, but my heart only needs some Blichael hapiness.
DeleteWell, good luck with the writing for the 15 (:
Thanks I'm writing it now. ;)
DeleteAnd now on a lighter comment, and a long overdue too, these are my favorite quotes/moments.
ReplyDelete1. Backwards t-shirt moment. The laughter as start of THE moment. So Bromance. Such a simple detail that put a believable mood in all the sex scene. "He was about to put it on again when Blake stopped him." Outstanding turn on.
2. "-I want it to be special. Blake said as he kissed Michael. Michael broke the contact his lips were making with Blake's to say –It's already special. Then he kissed him." Come on, do you really dare to even consider separate them? They're extraordinary together!
3. Second sex scene. Holy shit. Blake's hands go into Michael's pants, the blowjob, the way Michael came and came, the position when Blake ends. I lose my breathe reading it EVERYTIME.
4. "Blake looked at Michael and Michael turned around." Those eight words bursts all the tension loaded for the previous seven parts. That one line and I was melting and go crazy with it. Just genius.
5. The first kiss by Michael and the against the wall kiss by Blake.
6. The Blake's "I love you". Great climatic moment.
7. "He made his way to Michael's bed. Then he slowly got into bed with Michael and they cuddled under the covers. A few minutes later they fell asleep in each other's arms." I'm in LOVE with this scene.
8. The massage begins it all. "Blake saw it and Michael saw that Blake saw it. They both looked at each other for what seemed like forever." Part One was like... a bromance in the edge of losing the b. Pure sexual tension.
9. The first sex scene could go wrong in so many ways, but it didn't. Feels -like everything else in the story- intimate, warm. "Michael took a deep breath and then exhaled as Blake went inside him."
10. Overall, the cliffhangers. You know how deliver perfectly each final and leave us beggin for more. Intriguing, exciting, fun.
11. Michael and Nellie lovely night ending with the confession at the rooftop and the kiss in the pouring rain. "So he decided to kiss her. As he did so lighting flashed, a few seconds later they heard a thunderous sound followed by millions and millions of tears now falling from the sky." Somehow, it's a little heartbroken too.
12. "Once their hug was over. Michael was sure of two things, he did not want to go home and that he did have feelings for Blake." Michael's falling in love.
13. Nellie calls and moves everything. "Michael's in the next room sometimes I wish he was you." Harsh, effective but harsh. The triangle took form.
14. "Something only one friend would say to another. Blake had told Michael that he was in love with Nellie." The twist triangle revelation.
15. "There was no written message just a picture, but you know what they say, a picture is worth a thousand words. The picture showed Michael and Nellie kissing." CRASH. "He asked her directly the night she was eliminated. Nellie gave him an answer, she chose Michael." CRASH. "Blake punched the pillow that smelled like Michael, and Michael's scent grew stronger with every punch" Aw. CRASH.
1. Yes I felt like things were getting really heavy in the room with the cheese lampout was too public for a sex scene so I had to get someone to interrupt them so they could go into their dorm room, but then I needed that spark that would set them on fire again. I decided to use the t-shirt since he had to put it on in the dark I figured that was a good way to get Michael shirtless again.
Delete2. They truly are!
3. I struggled with the second sex scene I wanted to make it better than the first one and I think I nailed it! Pun intended.
4. :)
5. Yes the first kiss had to be special I think it really set the mood and hinted at who would take charge in the relationship.
6. Yes Blake was a little uncomfortable at first but when he came around I wanted it to be climactic.
7. I did this one because I wanted them to have a more emotional connection and not just a physical one.
8. Yes the bromance begins to become a romance.
9. Yes! Oh yes! The first sex scene could have been a disaster! I had to ask myself how would two straight guys have gay sex for the first time?! I think I did a pretty good job with It tho. I wasn't planning on writing a sex scene at all for this fic, but the readers demanded one, so I wrote my first sex scene ever and I'm glad I did. :)
10. I love cliff hangers so much! On TV in movies, etc so I knew I had to have some on this fic.
11. My goal here was to make Nellie likable. I wanted you guys to like her! But I guess I didn't do a good job with that lol. I know you guys like her outside of the fic but in the fic you guys don't.
12. Yes Michael realized he did love Blake.
13. Yes that line was very harsh but I think it was honest and Blake is an honest guy.
14. Yes I started this fic really late in the season when Nellie was already gone so I had to include her some how. ;)
15. Crash, Crash, Crash!!!
I love reading these comments thank you! I will try to not disappoint but be ready for anything! ;)
Lamp but it* not lampout lol
DeleteI love reading your feedback. Thank you!
DeleteAnd I yours! ;)
DeleteGod bless you lol Wise words all the way. Blichael love forever <3
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deletedon't tell me you lost the love by Blichael :(
ReplyDeleteSee if this helps a bit :P http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8sqwvNhWK1rcqmg6o1_500.jpg
OMG! I love your history! It's really original!
Never! Blake and Michael are just too perfect, they need a little drama in their life. Thank you! I love this story too!
DeleteYou are a very good writer, my compliments!
ReplyDeleteBut you would be much more of a genius if you keep being progressive and "different".
The story always ends with a romance between a boy and a girl (Michael & Nellie). We would love to see ending up Blake & Michael together and see what the contenders reactions are. It would make the story more original and interesting if Blake & Michael would end up together.
And honestly, Blake & Micael is the reason we start reading this.
You're a genius! We really do need a Blake & Michael romance. It's interesting and great to read about a gay couple, who are so different from each other but connect so well!
Gr. Ronald ;)
Thanks for the compliment. From the beginning I wanted this fic to be different and original. I have not read any other fan fic so I have no idea how original this one is but from the comments you guys are leaving me I can tell that I must be doing something right. I have not decided how this will end yet, there are so many possible endings I could write. I really love being shocked when it comes to stuff like this, so I really want to have a shocking ending. But I'm not sure yet, I wrote a rough draft of the next part you guys will probably not like it but I feel like it is necessary to allow the story to advance!
DeleteIt's your choice! We would love to see some love between Michael & Blake, because it's unusual and unexpected :). It would help a lot of people to accept theirselves.
DeleteGood luck writing! We would love to see a happy ending with Blake & Michael :)
:)
DeleteHi when's the next one
ReplyDeleteNext one will be up at Midnight eastern time. That's in less than 6 hours ;)
DeleteYay. I want more. More. More. Yur such a good writer
ReplyDeleteNext part will be up in 2 hours! :)
Deletedon't end it up with the three together cause that would be stupid and i love this fanfic too much so don't mess it up. keep it real, just sayin'
ReplyDeletemichael & blake forever!
I don't think the three of them will end up together. One will definitely be left out. I just haven't decided who yet, but if I keep it realistic then it would have to be Blake.
DeleteI felt like you were yelling at me as I read this comment lol.
Why would it be realistic to let Blake end up alone? We are all rooting for Blake & Michael to be together! We love them. We cherish them. We want them. Blake & Michael is the reason we start reading.
DeleteFor us, it is more realistic and likely if Nellie ends up alone.
Please don't disappoint us, we really believed in Blake & Michael as a couple. It would mean the world if they live happily together. And you know what the decision of the poll is: BLAKE & MICHAEL.
Thanks.
I love the passion! You guys are awesome! Truely amazing! :)
DeletePlease make it end with michael and blake together. If that doesnt happen im going to be very dissapointed. I was one of the first readers and one of the first to leave a comment on the first part written by you. Since then i kept falling more and more in love with michael and blake. If it doesnt end with them totether, i dont know what to say to you. I want it to end with them. Please please please!!!
ReplyDeleteMan oh man, you might want to skip the next part...... :(
DeleteI think it's good that we don't know of whether this story will end with Blake/Michael or Nellie/Michael.
ReplyDeleteObviously, I want Blichael all the way, but the plot is very good. Just don't break my heart please haha
Yes so far so good. :)
DeleteHow much more parts are there?
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure yet at least 5 more :)
DeleteAgh! I can go online after many days, my computer sucks :/ Sorry for not commenting earlier.
ReplyDeleteOkay, I am confused. If history continues, my happiness is over one way or another. Love Blichael and Blellie but not Michellie, I do not know why. I just hope Blake fight until the end, and that Michael realizes they have to be together, I love you Nellie but forgiveness for once in life you have to let them happy lololol
And sorry for getting me, but if history has to be realistic, I think it is more likely Blellie than Michellie, because they were always together, rarely with Michael :P just my point of view.
DeleteWhen I did the poll no one voted for Blake/Nellie.
DeleteMichael and Nellie have video that they made together on YouTube. Have you seen them? They were on a ride once. :)
DeleteOh yes I seen, so cute together . Anyway I cry for Blake and Michael. Hahaha great job!
DeleteThank you, next one is up right now!
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