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When Nellie found out she was going home she was
heartbroken. She wanted to win so badly. It was as if all the light in the
world disappeared and she couldn't see. But in the distance she noticed a tiny
light that got bigger and brighter as she got closer to it. That light was
Blake and he was the light that saved Nellie from the darkness.
The night Nellie was to go home she and Blake met somewhere
only they knew. It was there that Blake told Nellie he had feeling for her. It
was there that they kissed. It was there that their kiss stayed. Blake never
told Michael and neither did Nellie. That was the second time they had kissed.
But Nellie realized that she did not feel the same for Blake.
Nellie knew Blake was a good guy. Any girl would be lucky to
have him. But she did not love him, she had feeling for someone else. Nellie
decided then and there to be honest with Blake.
"Blake, I'm sorry but I don't feel the same way for you
as you do for me." She told him.
Blake was heartbroken. He had been waiting for a girl like
Nellie to come into his life and now she was leaving. Blake didn't know what to
say so he kissed Nellie one last time in hopes that this time she would feel
something for him.
Nellie looked at Blake with her tear filled eyes,
"I'm so sorry Blake, but I love someone else." She
said and then kissed Blake goodbye on the cheek.
She turned around to leave and reached for the door knob.
"Is it Michael?" It took every ounce of courage
Blake had to ask this question, because he knew the answer could potentially
kill him.
Nellie looked back at Blake, still holding on to the door
knob, her eyes were like a waterfall, and her mouth was like a desert. She
couldn't bring herself to answer Blake's question with words so she just nodded
her answer, turned the door knob and left.
Blake stayed behind alone and heart broken. But the thing
about Blake is that he was a good actor and he just walked out that door
looking as if his heart had not been shattered into a million pieces.
Once Nellie left, Blake did not hear from her again. Until
now. The reason that Blake didn't call Nellie (or vice versa) was because they
weren't allowed. Once the eliminated contenders went home they were not allowed
to contact the remaining contenders. This was so that they wouldn't discuss the
show. They wanted as few people to know who the remaining contenders were so
that it wouldn't leak and people could still be surprised. So Nellie was the
last person Blake thought would call.
As soon as Blake heard Nellie's voice all the feeling he had
for her came rushing back. Blake was surprised how quickly they came back after
the countless days he spent trying to forget. He realized that they were never
really gone, they were just overpowered by his new feeling for Michael. But is it
possible to love two people at the same time? Blake asked himself.
Nellie:
"Hello? Blake are you there?
Blake snapped out of his flash back. He realized he was
still naked.
Blake:
"Nellie why are you calling me so late?
Nellie:
"I didn't like how we ended things, can we talk?"
Blake looked around for his boxers he put them on and went
to the bathroom.
Blake:
"It's kinda hard to talk right now. Nellie why are you
crying is everything okay?"
Blake could hear Nellie wiping her nose. Nellie cleared her
throat.
Nellie:
"I'm sorry if I hurt you Blake, I didn't mean to
everything was happening so fast. I'm sorry.
Blake:
"Nellie don't worry about it. I came on too strong and
I'm glad you were honest with me."
Blake was whispering so that Michael wouldn't hear him
talking.
Nellie:
"I can barely hear you. Where are you?"
Blake:
"I'm in the bathroom, everyone's sleeping I gotta
whisper cuz I can't be too loud."
Nellie:
"I'm sorry for calling so late. How's Michael? Is he
still in the competition? If he is, tell him I miss him."
Blake felt a little jealous hearing Nellie ask about
Michael. But was unsure if he was jealous of Michael or Nellie.
Blake:
"Michael's in the next room sometimes I wish he was
you."
As soon as he said this he bit his tongue. He couldn't
believe he said that out loud. But it was true. When he kissed Michael's
forehead he imagined he was kissing Nellie.
Nellie:
"Does he know your talking to me? Will it start a
fight?"
Blake:
"No I don't think he has a clue."
Nellie:
"Blake...."
Before she could finish her sentence Blake interrupted her
and said.
Blake:
"It's really good to hear your voice Nellie."
The way Nellie said Blake's name made his heart race. He did
love her. He wanted to be with her. But he also wanted to be with Michael. But
the sound of Blake's name coming from the lips of an angel made him feel so
weak.
Blake had worked so hard to try and forget about Nellie, but
now this one phone call was bringing back all those feelings, feelings that
Blake knew Nellie would never have for him. He knew he had to get off the
phone.
Blake:
"I got to go, I have to get up early tomorrow. Good
night Nellie."
Nellie:
"Okay good night Blake."
They both hung up. Blake decided he wanted to try to forget
Nellie because his relationship with Nellie was more like a one way street.
With Michael it was a one way street too but the only difference was that
Michael was willing to drive against traffic to get to him. He also wanted to
explore a little more with Michael. He knew what he felt for Michael was real
and he wanted to keep feeling that for as long as possible, until death (or
Ryan) tears them apart.
Blake heard a knock on the door. He opens it, it was
Michael, he walked into the bathroom only wearing a towel wrapped around his
waist.
"Are you ok" Michael asks Blake.
Blake closed the bathroom door, locked it and pulled
Michael's towel off.
"I am now." Blake responded.
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Wow. I mean, WOW. Excellent. I like the love triangle Blake/Nellie/Michael, I wish she is confused by Blake and Michael, she is in love with both, and Blake the same thing happens haha. Good work, this story is very compelling. I love Blake lovesick. lol
ReplyDeleteThank you Danee I had a hard time writing this one, probably because Michael wasn't called back. I'm glad you liked it!
DeleteMore more more. Please write more! Can u please write another sex scene cuz in the end of this one it seems like there going to do it. I need more. Lol. There ssoooook hot. Yur a really good writer again. Can u write a sex scene?. Love it
ReplyDeleteI will see if I can squeeze another sex scene before Michael gets eliminated. :)
DeletePlease do!
ReplyDelete:)
Deletereally good work ;] u did kinda hav problems wit continuity dou, cuz back in i think 2nd or 3rd chapter, u wrote dat aylin was on d phone to charlie, and now u said dey werent allowed calls :P but it didnt matter and i actually had 2 favourite lines in dis chapter: one being "until death (or Ryan) tears them apart" d (or ryan) bit was hilarious :P and d second one being: ""Are you ok" Michael asks Blake. Blake closed the bathroom door, locked it and pulled Michael's towel off.
ReplyDelete"I am now." Blake responded." dis was just unbelievably hot :D love it!
Lol yes they aren't allowed to call each other but Aylin doesn't like to follow rules. ;)
Deleteahh dat makes more sense :P
Delete:)
DeleteLove this. Really, great great job.
ReplyDeleteThanks! Please share this blog with other Blake/Michael fans!. This blog is so close to getting 10,000 page views!
DeleteOH MY GOSH. THAT'S FUCKING AWESOME. I WANT MORE GIONADIGDDAOIGODIAGODIAA x_______x I do love the triangle between Michael/Blake/Nellie. I want Michael or Blake sex with Nellie. Maybe Blake can cheat on Michael and he have sex with Nellie for revange or something like that... LOVE IT. My favourite part is Blake heard a knock on the door. He opens it, it was Michael, he walked into the bathroom only wearing a towel wrapped around his waist.
ReplyDelete"Are you ok" Michael asks Blake.
Blake closed the bathroom door, locked it and pulled Michael's towel off.
"I am now." Blake responded.
OH MY GOSH. Blichael is soooooooooo cool. You rock x_x
Pd: I'm that anonymous. Remember that Nellie is a virgin
DeleteNellie is awesome I would really love for her to get her chance to fight for the one she loves.
DeleteIf you google "Blake and Michael icy hot" part 1 of this fic is the first search result! Is it just me or is that awesome!?!?
ReplyDeleteOMG that was amaIng! Plz write more!!! And put in another sex scene!
ReplyDeleteOMG that was amaIng! Plz write more!!! And put in another sex scene!
ReplyDeleteOMG that was amaIng! Plz write more!!! And put in another sex scene!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI like Blake confused with Nellie and Michael, I love her to lose her virginity to Blake. Excellent all lines! Definitely the last line one was the best of this chapter :D Michael must fight against Nellie by Blake, would be, WOW awesome awesome awesome!
ReplyDeleteNellie will return again in a future part.
Deleteit was so great! i think michellie should happen thou.
ReplyDeleteThey might ;)
DeleteWhen's the next one gonna be up?
ReplyDeleteMidnight! Eastern time! That's in about 3 hours.
DeleteI should be studying. But your story has me hypnotized lol. Getting better, I love everything that happens. Not at all boring.
ReplyDeleteThank you, that's why I keep it short so it doesn't get boring. ;)
DeleteCan u put a sex scene with michael and blake in the next one please? The sex scene was so good. Yur a good writer
ReplyDeleteI will write another for Part 11! It will be worth the wait! For now enjoy Part 10 which will be up at Midnight eastern time!
DeleteOkay i can wait. Lol. Hopefully. Can u make the sex scene long? Im sorry there just so hot?
ReplyDeleteI will try! :)
DeleteOkay. Thank you so much. Wait? Is the sex scene between michael and blake or nellie and whoever? Please be michael and blake!!
ReplyDeleteYou'll know once you read part 10! ;)
DeleteOkay
ReplyDeleteomg all these song referrences :D
ReplyDeletemy favourite is "Let's go all the way tonight, no regrets, just love" from part 8! I love this!